Comments please...

Any resemblance of any character on this blog to anyone living or dead is purely coincidental. No names have been mentioned to protect both the innocent and the guilty. This is a work of pure fiction and please treat it that way!!


Once there was a beautiful girl, very innocent and very bubbly. There came a guy into her life. She liked the exuberance, enthusiasm and the joyful nature of that guy. He was someone with no care in the world, meant to be free and to bring joy to everybody around him!
The girl loved the guy and the guy adored the girl. They were perfect for each other and complemented each other in almost everything. They enjoyed every moment of their life.
One day she thought, that the guy might want to visit far off places and reach far greater heights. She knew she could not feel the same about any other guy and was envious of the heights that he was beginning to reach. She felt that he would leave her when he reached those far places. But little did she realize that she was in him all along.
She thought "I am going to set a trap. The next time the guy comes, he will never leave again"
The guy who was also deeply in love with the girl appeared the very next moment, fell into the trap and was literally put in a cage.
She could see him everyday . There he was the object of her passion, and she showed him to her friends proudly, who said "Now what else do you desire?? You have everything!"
However a drastic change started taking place in the guy. He was unable to come out of the emotional shackles put on him. He lost his usual cheerfulness and hence express the true meaning of his life, began to waste away and lost his humor and patience . Also since the girl had the guy, she no longer had to woo him and was taking him for granted.



BREAK.........


Now comments please...

--Was it right on the girls part to do what she did??
--Why was the guy sad? After all he had everything that he wanted??
--What would be the next step that the guy would take?

So on an so forth....

All of you be frank and let me know what u feel... Please help me complete the story!!



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{Thanks to my friend Rachna Nambiar for the above lines ;)}