Any resemblance of any character on this blog to anyone living or dead is purely coincidental. No names have been mentioned to protect both the innocent and the guilty. This is a work of pure fiction and please treat it that way!!
Once there was a beautiful girl, very innocent and very bubbly. There came a guy into her life. She liked the exuberance, enthusiasm and the joyful nature of that guy. He was someone with no care in the world, meant to be free and to bring joy to everybody around him!
The girl loved the guy and the guy adored the girl. They were perfect for each other and complemented each other in almost everything. They enjoyed every moment of their life.
One day she thought, that the guy might want to visit far off places and reach far greater heights. She knew she could not feel the same about any other guy and was envious of the heights that he was beginning to reach. She felt that he would leave her when he reached those far places. But little did she realize that she was in him all along.
She thought "I am going to set a trap. The next time the guy comes, he will never leave again"
The guy who was also deeply in love with the girl appeared the very next moment, fell into the trap and was literally put in a cage.
She could see him everyday . There he was the object of her passion, and she showed him to her friends proudly, who said "Now what else do you desire?? You have everything!"
However a drastic change started taking place in the guy. He was unable to come out of the emotional shackles put on him. He lost his usual cheerfulness and hence express the true meaning of his life, began to waste away and lost his humor and patience . Also since the girl had the guy, she no longer had to woo him and was taking him for granted.
BREAK.........
Now comments please...
--Was it right on the girls part to do what she did??
--Why was the guy sad? After all he had everything that he wanted??
--What would be the next step that the guy would take?
So on an so forth....
All of you be frank and let me know what u feel... Please help me complete the story!!
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{Thanks to my friend Rachna Nambiar for the above lines ;)}
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8 comments:
Sometimes even being the winner we will be ultimate losers.Probably the samething happened with the gal.she failed to realise "The quickest way to receive love is to give; the fastest way to lose love is to hold it too tightly"....
probably you are right! Thanks for the visit, whoever you are
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The Story seems to be one sided... I feel its only the boys version i can never accept a gal would do anything like that, You seem to have cooked up a good story line... Suppose you need to put up the other version too. For only then can something be understood and commenteded.
@Anonymous(Well I seem to get a lot nowadays!!)
I am just one person so can only put up one side of the story! If I could think up both the sides, then I guess I would not have to write about it!!
:)
One thing I didn't understand is How opinions of unknown help you to complete your story?
Have you given authority for unknown to judge your emotions?
Anyways Couple of readers shared their opinions, Now its your turn to complete the story..!
Shall we expect something more...?
@Anonymous
Thanks for the visit!
Let me try to answer what you have asked..
--How opinions of unknown help you to complete your story?
I was out of ideas and wanted some fresh perspective on things, that's why i wanted ideas, especially ppl unknown, coz they wud not be judgmental!!
--Have you given authority for unknown to judge your emotions?
Madam/Sir, I frankly did not understand this! Where and when do I say anything written was about me and I needed someone to judge my emotions!
:)
It is my turn to complete the story... Well I don't think I'll be doing that!
If you look at the first comment that i got, it was almost after 11 months, second comment was after almost 18 months after I posted it. And now you, after around 21 months.
So I am not sure I'll be able to do any justice now to that story!
Sorry to disappoint.
:)
You expected unknown to comment only to know different perspectives or ideas b'coz they can't be judgmental and it really doesn't matter when they gave their opinions 11 or 18 or 21 months after you posted your blog.May be I was bit late to drop into your blog world..!
I suppose you need to complete the story the way you wanted it to be.
How I wish you will not disappoint me ;)
@Anonymous
I really am sorry to disappoint, but as I said earlier, I really have run out of ideas about that now!
For me it does matter when I get the opinions as you can only strike the iron when it is hot and not otherwise!
:)
There was no sure way that I wanted the story the end, that is why i left it open for interpretation, but alas it was not meant to be!!
:)
Maybe in the future when I can, I'll try to complete it!!
Thanks for the visit and encouragement!!
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